Constructive Criticism

I thought I’d start off the new year with a few thoughts for God on how He runs the world.

How wonderful are Your works, O God!

How perfect are Your promises!

But if I may offer some constructive criticism,

perhaps Your ways might be improved.

 

Lead us to Your quiet waters

            but not through the ravine of death.

Prepare a table for us

            but not in the presence of our enemies.

Give us Psalm 23

            without Psalm 22.

 

Give us the Red Sea

            without the slavery

The Promised Land

            without the wilderness.

 

Give us Eden

            without the snake.

The Tree of Life

            without that other one.

 

Give us Easter

            without Good Friday.

 

Give us the prize

            without the race.

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